fisst of all, this is not a standart build, Im still trying it out.
Second, there is no Chouxvalier there, I just really like it's art lol.
rate\fix\etc.

looks inconsistent. cant tell wat you're trying to do

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Could you elaborate more? I know it looks random but I don't find it too needed to have more copies of the madolches and if the problem is jar, sangan, and\or snowman, they are there so I wont get stuck with no monsters. (Though the former 2 serve a different part as well as just fillers)

this is my basic madolche deck. its an older build but still pretty consistant. the main focus is trying to get the spells and tira out as soon as possible.

I think you are running too much of everything. Everyone that is playing Madolches seem to run more gelatos and stuff but I don't feel like more than 1 copy is needed for all Madolches (except Magileine that should be @3), because it is all seached anyway...