Dragoon
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 |  Subject: Spirit Renewed  Sat Oct 12, 2013 11:25 pm | Thoughts?  |
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Liyana
Team : Dreamstate
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| | Subject: Re: Spirit Renewed Sun Oct 13, 2013 6:47 am | Looks good, though needs a more prominent light source and smudge needs work, but nice colours they blend nicely
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Dragoon
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| | Subject: Re: Spirit Renewed Sun Oct 13, 2013 2:57 pm | does that look better? (thanks to sabb for some of that sig's ideas)  |
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Sabbaticus
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| | Subject: Re: Spirit Renewed Sun Oct 13, 2013 4:37 pm | Looks good man. Liyana was right about the light, the new one looks good but I prefer the original. Better colours. You can add a stronger light source without taking away from that. You can try using bokeh effects instead of simple coloured spheres in the second one (more variation, randomness, and accurate to light/dust illuminated on a camera). Also try styling your text with solid colours/gradients instead of making it semi-transparent. The text colour also contrasts too much to your colour scheme. http://mediamilitia.deviantart.com/art/Bokeh-Effects-Pack-143632498I used bokeh effects in my Kalut the Moon Shadow signature submission in the Dark Illusion event.  |
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Dragoon
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| | Subject: Re: Spirit Renewed Thu Oct 17, 2013 2:38 pm | sorry bin a bit busy rl but I tried wat you told me sabb >>>  |
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