ALu wrote:

Everything is noobish.

How is "everything" Noobish?

ALu wrote:

Everything is noobish.

ur actually Quite rude for Saying its Noobish, why dont u Post some of ur Works then?

Those Pics r awesome...But there's This Problem with ur Sig
it exceeds the Legal size that its Supposed to be, Check the academy rules to know..
and again awesome stuff there ^^

Jaaden wrote:

ALu wrote:

Everything is noobish.

ur actually Quite rude for Saying its Noobish, why dont u Post some of ur Works then?

Those Pics r awesome...But there's This Problem with ur Sig
it exceeds the Legal size that its Supposed to be, Check the academy rules to know..
and again awesome stuff there ^^

Thanks. I'll fix it.

Bad placements of the resources, too big, no flow, no depth, too many focals, no blending of whatsoever, not very good text placement, font and colors.

ALu wrote:

Bad placements of the resources, too big, no flow, no depth, too many focals, no blending of whatsoever, retarded text placement, font and colors.

Overall, noobish. I usually write pages of fixes but it's not worth it here. It seems that your friend doesn't want to learn anyway.

Dude, I had something in mind to reply to you but you're not even worth the reply. So eh, consider it dropped.

Pay no attention to the man with an ironically terrible avi and sig I will admit, there's always room for improvement, but I wouldn't go as far as to call these terrible. It seems she may have gotten lazy with making her signature blend well with the pictures, but aside from that, no real complaints. I'm especially fond of the Chobits pic

I somewhat have to agree with ALu i'm afraid..

Most looks like it's just a background and render and then some playing around with opacity, then a text and thats it.

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Bad placements of the resources, too big, no flow, no depth, too many focals, no blending of whatsoever, retarded text placement, font and colors.

all of the above is true (:

Sorry, but I do not like them.. Tell her to try out some tutorials, u can find lots of great ones on deviantart (: Even google is ur friend here (: Don't be afraid to try out something new and "hard", even if it doesn't succeed u will have learned something new.

I think they're fine, tbh e.e Granted, nothing special, but is there really any need for the derogatory terms? Her worst mistakes were the poorly executed signatures. Her hand at properly rendering things will fix itself with time. Everything else, as far as focal points, flow, etc, is really up to personal preference. I, for example, find ALu's and Boattack's sets rather unexceptional. I'd sooner be seen putting up something like our OP's friend's Chobits picture as a sig than anything along either of those sets' lines. That doesn't mean they're necessarily bad, and I can see both artists put some effort into what they did, but I far prefer what our OP's friend has done in her Chobits piece, really.

Personally, I'm fine with criticism, but come on, ALu. Really?

Anywho, I'd rather not derail the topic any further e.e

Guise, let's try to keep it civil, k?

-xXPAINXx- wrote:

I think they're fine, tbh e.e Granted, nothing special, but is there really any need for the derogatory terms? Her worst mistakes were the poorly executed signatures. Her hand at properly rendering things will fix itself with time. Everything else, as far as focal points, flow, etc, is really up to personal preference. I, for example, find ALu's and Boattack's sets rather unexceptional. I'd sooner be seen putting up something like our OP's friend's Chobits picture as a sig than anything along either of those sets' lines. That doesn't mean they're necessarily bad, and I can see both artists put some effort into what they did, but I far prefer what our OP's friend has done in her Chobits piece, really.

Personally, I'm fine with criticism, but come on, ALu. Really?

Anywho, I'd rather not derail the topic any further e.e

Guise, let's try to keep it civil, k?

I agree.. the signature I got is pretty meh.. :p I only made it to have something xD


I don't agree with you that these are good, nor will I ever, thats my opinion, just like u can think that any of my works do sux :p

What I suggest is, that if you DO want to make graphics and show them to people, look up some tutorials to make something, people want to watch, rather than just go the easy copy/paste that you can do in regular paint. Photoshop deserves better (not saying this is made in photoshop, what do I know..)

And just to justify myself. I am NOT pro, and I do NOT think that I am the best one ever out there..

Awesome pics. I would like to know, if possible, who the guy in the 8th pic is, or what manga/anime (if any) it belongs to. It's the black & white pic, with 1 guy holding a sword and another guy with blades on his fingers.

Darkness Son wrote:

Awesome pics. I would like to know, if possible, who the guy in the 8th pic is, or what manga/anime (if any) it belongs to. It's the black & white pic, with 1 guy holding a sword and another guy with blades on his fingers.

Thats from D-Grey Man ^.^ and thats Allen Walker looking awesome as usual :3

-xXPAINXx- wrote:

I think they're fine, tbh e.e Granted, nothing special, but is there really any need for the derogatory terms? Her worst mistakes were the poorly executed signatures. Her hand at properly rendering things will fix itself with time. Everything else, as far as focal points, flow, etc, is really up to personal preference. I, for example, find ALu's and Boattack's sets rather unexceptional. I'd sooner be seen putting up something like our OP's friend's Chobits picture as a sig than anything along either of those sets' lines. That doesn't mean they're necessarily bad, and I can see both artists put some effort into what they did, but I far prefer what our OP's friend has done in her Chobits piece, really.

Personally, I'm fine with criticism, but come on, ALu. Really?

Anywho, I'd rather not derail the topic any further e.e

Guise, let's try to keep it civil, k?

I've changed my mind after 3 drinks. This is a topic made by a troll with the intention, well, to troll.
I'll report it.

Really? You think this is my attempt to troll? Dude. just drop it. I'm not trying to troll anyone. My friend was asking for criticisim but after seeing the first few remarks, you've pretty crushed her. But hey, report all you want. I see no reason to consider this post "trolling" so have at it.

Boattack wrote:

-xXPAINXx- wrote:

I think they're fine, tbh e.e Granted, nothing special, but is there really any need for the derogatory terms? Her worst mistakes were the poorly executed signatures. Her hand at properly rendering things will fix itself with time. Everything else, as far as focal points, flow, etc, is really up to personal preference. I, for example, find ALu's and Boattack's sets rather unexceptional. I'd sooner be seen putting up something like our OP's friend's Chobits picture as a sig than anything along either of those sets' lines. That doesn't mean they're necessarily bad, and I can see both artists put some effort into what they did, but I far prefer what our OP's friend has done in her Chobits piece, really.

Personally, I'm fine with criticism, but come on, ALu. Really?

Anywho, I'd rather not derail the topic any further e.e

Guise, let's try to keep it civil, k?

I agree.. the signature I got is pretty meh.. :p I only made it to have something xD


I don't agree with you that these are good, nor will I ever, thats my opinion, just like u can think that any of my works do sux :p

What I suggest is, that if you DO want to make graphics and show them to people, look up some tutorials to make something, people want to watch, rather than just go the easy copy/paste that you can do in regular paint. Photoshop deserves better (not saying this is made in photoshop, what do I know..)

And just to justify myself. I am NOT pro, and I do NOT think that I am the best one ever out there..

Lawl, don't get the wrong idea, man e.e I don't think your work sucks. I've been to your thread. I really liked the giraffe pic you did. I'm just trying to get the point across here that alot of how we interpret art is up to personal taste. There's always room for improvement, but talent is mostly subjective. There are many grey areas in arts and creativity, and not everyone will agree on the same thing. I personally think her hand just needs a bit of tuning that will come along by itself over time, whether she learns it from looking at other pieces or through experimenting on her own.

Didn't mean to offend you, bro e.e

-xXPAINXx- wrote:

Boattack wrote:

-xXPAINXx- wrote:

I think they're fine, tbh e.e Granted, nothing special, but is there really any need for the derogatory terms? Her worst mistakes were the poorly executed signatures. Her hand at properly rendering things will fix itself with time. Everything else, as far as focal points, flow, etc, is really up to personal preference. I, for example, find ALu's and Boattack's sets rather unexceptional. I'd sooner be seen putting up something like our OP's friend's Chobits picture as a sig than anything along either of those sets' lines. That doesn't mean they're necessarily bad, and I can see both artists put some effort into what they did, but I far prefer what our OP's friend has done in her Chobits piece, really.

Personally, I'm fine with criticism, but come on, ALu. Really?

Anywho, I'd rather not derail the topic any further e.e

Guise, let's try to keep it civil, k?

I agree.. the signature I got is pretty meh.. :p I only made it to have something xD


I don't agree with you that these are good, nor will I ever, thats my opinion, just like u can think that any of my works do sux :p

What I suggest is, that if you DO want to make graphics and show them to people, look up some tutorials to make something, people want to watch, rather than just go the easy copy/paste that you can do in regular paint. Photoshop deserves better (not saying this is made in photoshop, what do I know..)

And just to justify myself. I am NOT pro, and I do NOT think that I am the best one ever out there..

Lawl, don't get the wrong idea, man e.e I don't think your work sucks. I've been to your thread. I really liked the giraffe pic you did. I'm just trying to get the point across here that alot of how we interpret art is up to personal taste. There's always room for improvement, but talent is mostly subjective. There are many grey areas in arts and creativity, and not everyone will agree on the same thing. I personally think her hand just needs a bit of tuning that will come along by itself over time, whether she learns it from looking at other pieces or through experimenting on her own.

Didn't mean to offend you, bro e.e

No worries :p I'm not offended at all I just said, it was alright to hate my work ;p - it wasn't intented towards u, but in general

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My friend was asking for criticisim but after seeing the first few remarks, you've pretty crushed her.

Gee.. Sorry to say this, and u might think I'm a big jerk now.. - But If u can't take critisism, even the bad kind, don't post your pictures online.. This forum aint even the worst one, actually this is prolly one of the better..
Try posting copy/paste material on forums like d2jsp, and get bashed back to stoneage..

The work sucked so bad on so many levels Alu was right

TmcJagger wrote:

Really? You think this is my attempt to troll? Dude. just drop it. I'm not trying to troll anyone. My friend was asking for criticisim but after seeing the first few remarks, you've pretty crushed her. But hey, report all you want. I see no reason to consider this post "trolling" so have at it.

Now she knows she sucks she needs to be broken and made better

Albert Wesker wrote:

TmcJagger wrote:

Really? You think this is my attempt to troll? Dude. just drop it. I'm not trying to troll anyone. My friend was asking for criticisim but after seeing the first few remarks, you've pretty crushed her. But hey, report all you want. I see no reason to consider this post "trolling" so have at it.

Now she knows she sucks she needs to be broken and made better

Dude, you'd not say that if you knew her. But all in all, not sure what to say. I'm done on this.

TmcJagger wrote:

Albert Wesker wrote:

TmcJagger wrote:

Really? You think this is my attempt to troll? Dude. just drop it. I'm not trying to troll anyone. My friend was asking for criticisim but after seeing the first few remarks, you've pretty crushed her. But hey, report all you want. I see no reason to consider this post "trolling" so have at it.

Now she knows she sucks she needs to be broken and made better

Dude, you'd not say that if you knew her. But all in all, not sure what to say. I'm done on this.

I bet you I would